Revision: removed stepstool
Growing Tall
Revision: added capri's
You Are What You Eat
Revision: erased two dishes to make table less crowded
Brushing Teeth
Revision: added floss
Puberty Banner
Revision: rather than erase just the one girl, I erased two for balance. If the scene looks too empty, I can put the one girl back in.
Keeping Track of Your Period
Revision: put girl in pajamas
Shoes Get Bigger
Revision: made mother more contemporary-looking, made it more obvious she is mother.
Note: I actually imagined the girl to be with her mother, not a storeclerk. Thought this tied in with the other sketches better. But I can easily change mother into storeclerk if you think that makes more sense.
M/D Conflict
Revision: made mother more contemporary-looking (I think), actually I don't love this picture of the mother. What do you think?
Shaving Underarms
New illustration, made it less like the AmGirl slide
Rite of Passage
Revision: turned the girl's body around
Many New Emotions
Revision: Replaced "in love" and "sad" with "proud" and "sentimental". Changed angry to grumpy and happy to excited. I wanted all the emotions to be slightly more complex.
Some less, some more
Revision: got rid of the fishing pole, tightened up the faces, made the silhouette of the left girl cleaner.
Hips Get Wider
New illustration
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